Maxawesome

I have written my first submission in almost four years. Damn I didn't realize I've been on here that long.  It's an idea that came to me while I was studying for an important test.  It's only one paragraph, but I'm glad how it came out.  I'm not really sure where to take it from here.  I would appreciate any criticisms or ideas that will help improve and continue.  I don't have a title or a clear path the story is supposed to take.  I think I know where I want to take it, but I'm not sure if it's the best way to go.  I would love to hear what you think.

I was watching lost and I saw Nestor Carbonell playing the character Richard.  He was wearing a suit and tie while looking through a window, and I suddenly flashbacked to Half-Life 2.  The guy would be perfect in a Half-Life movie!  Seriously check out this headshot of him, and try to deny that he looks like a young G-Man. http://www.imdb.com/media/rm149459968/nm0004801 The guy has proven he has acting ability and would be perfect in the role.  I don't think the age would matter at all.  As long as he can copy the personality and mannerisms of this amazing character.  So what do you guys think?  Also please no Lost spoilers because I'm stil

I just got done watching the indie superhero flick Defendor, and I can tell you it was great!  The film was written and directed by first-timer Peter Stebbings.  Before this Stebbings was an actor in various televison and movie roles.  Fans like myself of the television series Jeremiah will know him as the major character Marcus Alexander.  For the movie, it is excellent.  It's about a man named Arthur(Woody Harrelson) who is the slow but friendly alter-ego to the superhero Defendor.  He fights crime, at the same time looking for a super villain named Captain Industry.  He is helped by a friend/hooker(Kat Dennings).  On his way to defeat capt